I dont see whats wrong with it, she looks pretty good. It just isnt too flattering looking on her now because she looks much sexier when her hair is all silky and straight, but this is more natural and I dont think there is anything wrong with it.
I don't think it looks bad, but maybe a little serum to tame the frizzies around her crown would have helped. She prob didn't want to weigh it down and losr volume, but something needs to be done about that....