I think it looks great! Sometimes I see girls with this look and they look really bad, not everyone can pull it off, but you got it right!
Peachface its not too difficult to do this at home, I did mine a couple years ago and I did red underneath. I had some help from my mom though, which I definitly advise. I heard its best to part it right at that bump near the bottom/half of your skull, it has a proper name but I don't remember it lol. If you feel around on your head you should find it easily, like that point where your skull kind of dips. Gosh hard to describe lol. But thats what I did and it looked great. If you want more drama, part a little above that, if you want less then part a little below.